Woah! This one is absolutely splendid! Heck! I thought I had taken a complete tour of your gallery but it looks like I haven't seen everything! Curses that is not the first time it happens... Damn' DA!
This said I totally love the details on the iris and the reflection. You're just fantastic with a pencil! I need to show you a few deviants I'm watching too... Just remind me to.
What an outstanding reflection! You could stand to work on the eye however. The strokes are a little bit rough and slightly too dark. The eyebrow could be a bit more detailed as well, the hairs should probably be lighter.
The picture has a lot of definition, but it appears almost coarse here. Try softer values, like one's you could find in this eye: [link] or here: [link] . On another note, the signature should probably be completely towards the right of the image.
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Thank you so much for the feedback! About it being too dark and rough is mostly because of how the reference image looked. I couldn't agree more about the eyebrows though! Again, thank you so much for taking the time to write this